Lady Yuna
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Number of posts : 25
Age : 28
Location : New Zealand
Registration date : 2009-06-03
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 | Subject: From Ivalice to Spira  Fri Jun 05, 2009 11:44 am | |
| I know it just started but I was kinda bored and I couldn't sleep so I thought I may aswell type something up.  This is the first time I've posted something like this on the net so...umm... yeah...looking for reviews and... what should I do better next time? | |
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rayley9
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Number of posts : 284
Registration date : 2009-05-28
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| | Subject: Re: From Ivalice to Spira Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:45 pm | |
| Well...There are loads of things you could put in your story! You could make someone get kidnapped, you could put some new characters in, you could create some weapons for you characters, you could make a giant war or ANYTHING that pops into your imagination! Because that's what storys are about, your imagination!  Anyway I'm LOVING the story so far! I rate it 9.7/10. Can't wait for Ch.2! | |
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