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Number of posts : 501 Age : 28 Registration date : 2009-12-18
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| Subject: The Crimson Ring Sat Feb 13, 2010 3:05 pm | |
| Chapter One
As I stare up at the red ring shaped moon I start to wonder if I'll ever find my brother. "You OK Omega?"Scouter asked. "You know I don't like to be called by my codename,"I replied. "Ya I know Jake,"Scouter said. Scouter is 20 years old with spiked light-brown hair wearing camo and black standard type3 military armor and he uses a semi-automatic type27 blaster rifle. I am 25 years old with slightly long black hair wearing black and gold type2 military armor. I use a fully automatic type24 rifle and a type14 magnum. "So when are you going to tell me your name Scouter?"I asked. "I'll tell you my name when we get off this planet,"Scouter said. "Come on I told you my name,"I said. I guess we were making too much noise because General Falcon came out and started to walk towards us. "Shouldn't you two be in bed?"he asked. "Yes Sir,"I replied. As Scouter and I were walking towards the bunker I was pulled aside by the general. He had a displeased look on his face and I know that meant he had bad news. "What is it Sir?"I asked. "I'm sending you to bunker DELTA5,"he said. "WHAT!?"I yelled. "Pack your things. This is your last night at GAMMA4,". He told me this two years ago. I am now a commander in the Star Force. I have not seen Scouter for a long time and I won't be seeing him soon because he has been reported dead.
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Mai-so Hie Member
Number of posts : 501 Age : 28 Registration date : 2009-12-18
Character Status Level: 6 Health: (100/100) Skill Points: (90/90)
| Subject: Re: The Crimson Ring Sun Feb 14, 2010 10:14 pm | |
| I forgot to post the characters. Characters Jake/Omega Scouter General Falcon
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Number of posts : 501 Age : 28 Registration date : 2009-12-18
Character Status Level: 6 Health: (100/100) Skill Points: (90/90)
| Subject: Re: The Crimson Ring Thu Feb 18, 2010 3:21 pm | |
| Chapter 2 Characters Jake/Omega Python/Aaron(Jake's new partner) General Liger Shadow Squadron(Jake's fighter squadron) Admiral Ken Kuetiara(Admiral of Star Force)
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Number of posts : 501 Age : 28 Registration date : 2009-12-18
Character Status Level: 6 Health: (100/100) Skill Points: (90/90)
| Subject: Re: The Crimson Ring Thu Feb 18, 2010 4:05 pm | |
| Chapter 2 "Are you alright Commander?"Python asked. "Ya I'm OK Aaron,"I replied. Python is my new partner. He is 19,a rookie,with flat mafia style blonde hair. He wears all black standard armor. "Why do you stare at the moon every night?"Python asked. "It's just something I do to get my mind off things,"I said. "Have you ever seen a Forger Sir?"Python asked. No one has ever asked me that so I didn't know how to react even though I have seen a Forger. It's just something I don't like to talk about. "No I haven't. I really don't want to either,"I said. "Everyone up! Admiral Kuetiara has an anuancement to make!"yelled General Liger via intercom. So of course we instantly got up,got dressed,and headed to the armory. As soon as we all got there Admiral Ken Kuetiara started to speak. "I have terrible news. The bunker Gamma4 has been destroyed. I know that you all had friends and family at that bunker but we all have to stay calm. I believe sinse we are the closest bunker we will be next so everyone suit up and prepare for battle."Admiral Kuetiara said. It only took two seconds after Admiral Kuetiara had finished talking for everyone to start running back towards thier barracks to get thier gear. "Yes finally I get to kill some Forgers,"Python said as he was getting his armor on. "Didn't you listen? I had friends that I cared about at Gamma 4 and now they're all dead. Including my greatest friend and my old partner,"I said in an angered tone. "I'm your partner now though,". "Yes but we will never be as close to eachother than me and Scouter was. We were like family to eachother and now he's dead but like you would care. Let's just suit up. Prepare Shadow Squad for launch."I ordered. "Yes Sir,"Python said as he ran off to get my squadron together. I can count on my squadron. We are the second best squad in the entire Star Force army. The only squad better than us is General Liger's squad. They are called Galaxy Squadron. So a few minutes later my squad was waiting in the shuttle bay waiting for my cammand. "Cammander on deck,"said Python as I walked in. "At ease men. Now you all know why you're up so early correct?"I asked. "Sir yes Sir,"they all said at once. "Good so I don't need to brief you on your objective. We must defend this bunker. Do I make myself clear?". "Sir yes Sir,". "Good. Now get into your fighters and prepare to launch."I ordered.
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Number of posts : 501 Age : 28 Registration date : 2009-12-18
Character Status Level: 6 Health: (100/100) Skill Points: (90/90)
| Subject: Re: The Crimson Ring Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:06 pm | |
| Chapter 3 Characters Jake/Omega Python/Aaron Dragon Fire/Leo(Layle's custom character) General Liger Shadow Squadron(Jake's Squad) Galaxy Squadron(Liger's squad) Delta Wolfs(Leo's squad) the Forgers(Enemy group)
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