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A Video Game based Roleplay site, where you Roleplay as a Canon Video Game Character, or your own Custom Character.
 
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 Here goes...Dave

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Mega Man
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Mega Man


Number of posts : 1335
Age : 26
Location : Taking the final fight with Wily
Registration date : 2008-08-11

Character Status
Level: 14
Health:
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Skill Points:
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PostSubject: Here goes...Dave   Here goes...Dave Icon_minitimeSat Apr 16, 2011 2:12 am

Name: Dave

Gender: Male

Race: Robot

Age: ???

Good or Evil: Good.

Fighting Style: Dave fights randomly

Game: Custom

Appearance: Here goes...Dave 0d875cc19sTY1See him below the number 8?

Strengths: Dave confuses the opponents with his AI problem after Wily messed up Dr. Light's computer.

Weaknesses: Dave's AI problem makes him an idiot.

Homeland: Dr. Light's Lab

History: After Mega Man defeated Quickman, along with Mario, Mega Man got a message saying this:
"Mega Man! The robot that will help you is on his way! Ever since Wily messed up my AI computer, however, there is a slight problem that is rather annoying. Dave, the helper robot, is an idiot."
After a very confusing meet with Dave, he's been helping, and intends to keep on fighting alongside with Mega Man to keep peace.
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Noel=Vermillion
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Noel=Vermillion


Number of posts : 97
Age : 28
Location : Behind the fourth wall
Registration date : 2011-03-10

Character Status
Level: 1
Health:
Here goes...Dave Left_bar_bleue50/50Here goes...Dave Empty_bar_bleue  (50/50)
Skill Points:
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PostSubject: Re: Here goes...Dave   Here goes...Dave Icon_minitimeSat Apr 16, 2011 11:31 am

It'd be nice to see some more text under...

Code:

Fighting Style;
History

Dave fights randomly... It'd be nice to get a closer explanation
on how random he actually fights. Only random is not precise enough.

Since Dave is a custom char, you could try and add some more history.
Like how he got created. Why he got created and how he actually turned into an 'idiot'.

I would also love the history to be third person omniscient,
meaning that your history should rather have no speech in it.

That is all. ^^
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